Some people think that businesses besides making a profit, they also need to have a social obligation. To a certain extent, I agree with this idea.
To commence with, if the business has many social activities, it can increase the value of the company and create the trust of customers in the company
Some activities which are related to social actions are usually good deeds, helping society to be more positive and more developed, so when the company tries to do social work, it cannot only improve the image of the company but also help society become more and more ecstatic, develop in a more positive direction. For example, Unilever which is a pharmaceutical multinational company, an organization has had a profound record of giving medical or other financial aid to the most deprived people in developing countries. Thanks to those social activities, Unilever has contributed to reducing social problems related to poverty and health in impoverished neighborhoods.
On the other hand, we can't deny that the main goal when starting a business is to make a profit, so money is still one of our top goals.
In order to maintain the operation of a company, there are many factors that need to be used money such as staff salaries, operating costs, transportation expenses, ... in addition to developing the company, we also have to run some programs such as marketing. If there is no profit, the company will not be able to secure the budget to carry out the above activities, leading to the inability to continue the company's operations.
Besides, generating profits can also support providing investment for social activities. For example, with Unilever as above, if they want to provide medical and health services to the poor, the first factor they need is the budget to be able to implement them.
In conclusion, although I agree that social responsibilities are crucial and can bring a lot of value to customers, making money is also very important when running a business.
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- In the past shopping was a routine domestic task Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby To what extent do you think this is a positive trend 61
- In the past shopping was a routine domestic task Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby To what extent do you think this is a positive trend 73
- In the past shopping was a routine domestic task Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby To what extent do you think this is a positive trend 69
- Topic Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others say this is the only way to save such traditions Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... neighborhoods. On the other hand, we cant deny that the main goal when starting a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99397590361 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85690560877 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.987744362 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230847548246 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883911682436 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752538797399 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123611614946 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841611769314 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.