Based on economic objectives, most businesses and companies are established. Some people believes that earning money could have a positive impact on society. I am of the opinion that, not only profitability is an important goal, but it is also important to create social benefits. I will discuss these two vision in this essay.
On the one hand, companies have a great impact on society by their activities in an indirect way. While, companies do their activity they make some social profits. To instance, the more companies earn, the more they pay taxes. Therefore, the government can work on social welfare and social security plans. Moreover, some people are working in businesses and companies as employee. Hence, they play an important role in solving one of the most important social problems, namely unemployment.
On the other hand, it is true that every kind of economic activities might have positive impacts on society but, it is not enough. First of all, in cases of environmental issues, depend on company nature, they have to play their role on resolving problems. For example, manufacturers who release toxic gases into the air should reduce the effects of their activity by planting trees. secondly, I agree that, businesses should participate in several well-intention activities in an effective way. It is important to do charitable works to help some poor people in order to tackle social problems. To instance, building houses for the homeless.
In conclusion, although making money is very important to each business but, both of profitability and, social responsibility should be aimed by businesses.
- Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should, therefore, be dealt with by the government while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples from your own experience. 84
- Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university to travel or gain work experience Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time Give reasons for your answer and include any your relevant examples from your own knowledge or experie 75
- The educational standards have declined in recent times particularly in the area of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the cause of this problem and odder some possible solution to it. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...by their activities in an indirect way. While, companies do their activity they make ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...ts of their activity by planting trees. secondly, I agree that, businesses should partic...
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...te in several well-intention activities in an effective way. It is important to do charitable works...
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Suggestion:
...sibility should be aimed by businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26053639847 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91569119071 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7490118557 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7647058824 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219197767952 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653719187908 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522175290834 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138619884896 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128209857481 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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