As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people suppose that besides the main goal of businesses is make money, they also have responsibilities to social. I totally agree with this idea.
To begin with,the business earn as much money as possible. Firstly, if companies make money, they pay more taxes. There are many different types of taxes for a company, such as corporate tax, sales tax, Value Added Tax (VAT) and the like. These taxes are the major sources of revenue for government. As the result, governments can use them to spend on hospitals, schools, transportation. Moreover, the business which make money can expand and provide more jobs. The more profit earning, the more work for labor. It helps to alleviate the unemployment rate.
On the other hand, business also have social responsibilities. First, the factories must not harm the environment. They are not allowed to discharge waste indiscriminately into the environment without treatment system because this is the main reason causing the global warming. Therefore, the factories have to response for their emissions and disposal of waste. Second, business which make profits should put money back into the community through charity and financing scholarships. For example, Vinamilk is the very big group of Vietnam. Besides the contribution of big taxes for the government, this company also have many volunteer programs and financing scholarships. The other business should learn from Vinamilk to help the country.
In conclusion, although making money is very important to each business, it has to responsibilities with the social.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97522648882 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4071686248 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274116233242 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850923978669 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105628658441 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190754739501 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754620994366 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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