In my point of view the television is one of the most important invent in our century. After advent of TV, "this small box" The society faced with a big change in compare before.
It is one of the remarkable entertainment specially for kids in different ages, they are able to catch numerous information in different area such as history, geography, sport etc. Also there is a large variety of cartoons and movies that it would bring an enjoyable time for them.
Although it has brought many benefits to our life, But still there are some disadvantages. Basically children are enthusiastic to watch TV specially cartoons and movies but it has reported that some children has affected by unsuitable channels day by day. So there is a big responsibility for adult to control the situation.
For example some kids after school want to watch TV for a long time, If we could not monitor them properly, It might be they surf in different programs, which is not appropriate for them in their age therefore, it would caused a big challenge in the filed of moral factors and psychological matters and the another hindrance of keep sitting in front of TV without any physical activities for a long time will be facing with a significant problems like obesity in the lower age.
As a result it is an important obligation of matured people as the parents to define the schedule of the time of watching TV, indoor and out door activity to manage them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78656126482 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78927628226 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.824904901 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136919566648 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050801374971 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374878605044 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680705339358 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330370551109 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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