What are the advantages and disadvantages of having older people living in the family home?
In our society these days, a state of art family, which has three or four members, is becoming more and more prevalent. elders masses living in the family home.This essay will explain the merits as well as demerits of topic.
To begin with merits,firstly, nowadays more much knowledge in society by older dwellers and understanding more the talk due to long experience their life.For example, old age people know which things bad or good effects of their life.As a result the movitave for best future plan.On the top that,old inhabitants have strong communication skills than modern counters. they are role model us because elder people know how to deal difficulties.
On the other hand, topic has demerits too. First and foremost, it is also make possible to opposing case because they are behaviour and work is very strictness,older masses thinking always old generation than modern world. Such as, .people often have this opinion because they are facing fear in sharing feelings in our home because of older people. Last but not the least, many old age dwellers effected some diseases. Moreover, nowadays disease from one person to another.
To conclude, i think nation have no jobs due to the corruption in India so they cannot spend so much money in the hospital. it should be all family members get together. The government of the country would be other places created old elderly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03017241379 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361553737 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.4032916358 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155235563661 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481251309115 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616389063639 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849337264036 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159579422133 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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