What are the advantages or disadvantages of having high salary?
Salary is the special attention of employees when they take part in the labor force. High salary has not only advantages but also disadvantages so that employees need to consider before starting a job.
High salary plays an important role in employee’s requirements. If people choose a well-paid job, they may have a wealthier life. They will have enough money to pay for luxury goods or services. They have chance to use facilities that are extremely good as well as modern. Besides, a high salary helps them consolidate their family caring ability. Their family can count on them because of their strong finance. Thanks to well-paid jobs, they can take care of their home without any concern. And their supply for their family can be a good repay.
People need to exchange many things if they want high salaries because of their disadvantages. An entrepreneur that is willing to pay a high salary may not have a good environment to work comfortably. Workload, as well as deadlines, makes them be on the go. These are the reason why they are always under pressure. Therefore, their mental health can be affected. In addition, they do not have time to care for themselves. Due to well-paid jobs, they need to concentrate on their work with various missions which need to be fulfilled before deadlines.
High salary can be the factor that people want when they choose a job. However, it does not always make them satisfied with their choice. Therefore, people need to consider the advantages and disadvantages of a job before making up their minds.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88257575758 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6769317536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518939393939 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8912653814 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.45 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233596322305 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811896727325 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851127861 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174075391707 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508811440926 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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