What are the causes of overpopulation? What can be done to solve this problem?
In the contemporary era, overpopulation has attracted enormous social concerns. The purpose of this essay is to give an analysis on the causes of the issue and provide solutions to resolve this worldwide problem.
Nowadays, there are two main factors that contribute to overpopulation around the world especially in almost developing countries. Firstly, poverty is believed to be one leading cause that leads overpopulation becoming one of global top concerns. There is a huge number of developing nations whose people have to live in slums with a lack of educational resources and little or no knowledge about family planning to avoid the raising of the population. Secondly, advanced technology in medical fields plays a crucial role in lengthening life expectancy, curing lethal diseases, thus helping in the decline of death rate over the world and also indirectly leading to overpopulation.
As population on earth growing rapidly, governments could certainly make more effort to reduce overpopulation through enacting various national policies related to birth control which lower income tax for those married couples who have single or two children and raising knowledge of sex education at school. For example, making sex education become an important subject for young kids from elementary to higher education level should be mandatory because most parents feel shy and are not comfortable to discuss such things with their kids freely. As a result, children are only able to look out on the internet where information is mostly incomplete and that will lead them to have countless misunderstandings and false knowledge about sex. Furthermore, raising awareness about family planning and post-effects of overpopulation among communities is also a possible solution to reduce its growing speed. One of the best ways is to let them know about a variety of safe sex techniques and methods available to avoid any unwanted pregnancy.
To summarize, overpopulation is a crisis that potentially stands alongside with air pollution as one of the biggest challenges facing humanity today. Both governments and individuals must play their part in taking care of this threat for a greater future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42565597668 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05233750974 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638483965015 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5349037433 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.153846154 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114167323436 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426312239315 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484544639422 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08523468359 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565320263932 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.