what are the challenges of travelling ?
Going on a trip after a long time makes people fresh and happy and everyone has a plan for it. Although going on a journey is awesome and attractive, it has lots of challenges too.
Challenges beginning from the moment you decide to travel. who am I travel with and where can I go are the first challenging questions you would face while lots of plan and many places came into your mind.
The next challenge is the type of transportation you travel with. For instance, if you travel with an airplane , the fear of falling makes you anxious and if you travel by car the risk of an accident makes you stressful. besides running out the fuel taken place for those people who travel in the desert.
another notable highlight has to be mentioned is losing identity or master card in foreign country.challenges startup when you go for shopping and after choosing and picking up goods you find out do not have money.in addition, you would have a problem with the airport to convince the officer who you are and why do not have your passport.
generally, going on vacation is the most important part of our life and we have to take it seriously.also, it is important but we do not disregard those challenges at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...g from the moment you decide to travel. who am I travel with and where can I go are...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun plan seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of plans'.
Suggestion: lots of plans
...llenging questions you would face while lots of plan and many places came into your mind. T...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...instance, if you travel with an airplane , the fear of falling makes you anxious a...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...isk of an accident makes you stressful. besides running out the fuel taken place for th...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...those people who travel in the desert. another notable highlight has to be mentioned i...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Generally
...are and why do not have your passport. generally, going on vacation is the most importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55504587156 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68323805819 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3701372232 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216994563877 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128671063597 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965917388891 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127707216069 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881064255106 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.