What are the differences between living in a big city and in the countryside

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What are the differences between living in a big city and in the countryside?

What are the differences between living in a big city and in the countryside?

Everything has two sides. And so do life in the city and life in the countryside. Whilst living in the city offers people with many good job opportunities and convenient services like education and health, life in the countryside brings people the sense of peace and relaxation in their mind.

The first difference is about the job opportunity. The city offers more jobs than the countryside does. In the countryside, people lives solely depend on doing farming which is seasonal. For example, in some remote areas in Mekong Delta, farmers only have two seasons to plant and harvest. When those seasons end, they have nothing to do but staying at home. Other peasants who do not possess land have to wait for others to hire them to do harvesting works. However, this kind of job is not stable and they have to do many other different jobs to keep the wolf at the door, it means to earn enough money for their family. Meanwhile in the city, thousands of jobs are available for both ordinary people and those with degrees. For those without certificates, they can choose to work as workers in factories or industrial zones. If they find that working in these places is not for them, they can choose to work as cab drivers or sell something that they are excel at. And for ones with degrees, they can choose to start their career in both internal and multinational companies that offer jobs related to their major like economy or engineering. It is not difficult to earn a living in the city.

Besides job offering, another significant difference between the two regions is the convenience offered by entertainment centers or healthcare services. In the countryside, people have to travel a long distance to reach a hospital or medical center in case of an emergency situation. Moreover, the entertaining service like cinemas or clubs are quite strange to rural residents because there is no cinema or club in rural areas. So it is not surprising when seeing people going to bed at 7 pm or 8 pm if you have a chance to visit the countryside. On the other hands, most best and well-equipped hospitals are located in big cities, so it is quite easy for people to receive advanced treatment if they have serious health problems. On the weekends, people can have a nice time with their family like dining together in a cozy restaurant or hanging out with friends and having a drink with them. If you get bored and do not know what to do, just take a walk around and you will find your own amusement.

In conclusion, the way for living is different from the rural areas to the city in many aspects. It is heaven or not depends on the way people living there enjoy the pace of life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... to earn enough money for their family. Meanwhile in the city, thousands of jobs are avai...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 959, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'excelled'.
Suggestion: excelled
...drivers or sell something that they are excel at. And for ones with degrees, they can...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 569, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'best' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: best
...it the countryside. On the other hands, most best and well-equipped hospitals are located...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64693877551 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60476368139 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0875609901 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.08 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215183324837 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862792598353 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195525646738 0.0667982634062 293% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29323625564 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.356414265291 0.056905535591 626% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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