What are your career goals and how do you expect your education at LaSalle College Vancouver to help you attain them?
► In what ways will you participate and commit to your education in order to be successful?
Selecting an appropriate career course is one of the biggest challenge for a student of my age. Selecting the best college for my study was struggling and some informative techniques do helped me choosing the best for me.
I am one of the students who does not select the study under the influence of pears, after enough discussion and research considering my interests I concluded I want be a marketing coordinator. So, I opted for Associates of Arts and LaSalle college is the one of the the best colleges offering the course as per my research on Canadian colleges on internet. It has outstanding results and appreciable job placement records. My search for the college for my holistic development with sufficient guidance and influential training suggests me for LaSalle college, as the college provides in-depth course study under the guidance of experienced staff members and appropriate practical assignments.
Marketing coordinator is the interesting and lucrative option in Canada and i see my as a marketing manager in some reputed firm in next 5 years. My friend and my elder cousin guided me for the career they are successful, satisfied and well settled, there experiences inspired me. No doubt, arranging funds for studies is the major struggle but the college provides one of he most affordable and quickest degree as mentioned at its website, it would definitely assist me to focus on my studies better by reliving me from burden extravagant expenses of foreign studies. Apart from this i have support of my relatives already living in Canada, they will assist me in all my settlements during my study in Vancouver.
Education is the only way a person can live his life of dreams otherwise illiterates just survive they donor live. Education can provide me a luxurious life that I planed for me in Canada and will also help me in earning respect in society as well. Education is not limited to campus I would like get some exposure outside the college by working part time to know more about the new work environment and culture of the place.
To wrap up, as per my interest in marketing, I opted associates of arts and my research suggests the LaSalle College is the best for the purpose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to choose' or 'choose'.
Suggestion: to choose; choose
...ome informative techniques do helped me choosing the best for me. I am one of the stu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... helped me choosing the best for me. I am one of the students who does not sele...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... Arts and LaSalle college is the one of the the best colleges offering the course as pe...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... Arts and LaSalle college is the one of the the best colleges offering the course as pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ting and lucrative option in Canada and i see my as a marketing manager in some r...
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Message: Did you mean 'of the most'?
Suggestion: of the most
...r struggle but the college provides one of he most affordable and quickest degree as menti...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ttlements during my study in Vancouver. Education is the only way a person can l...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in earning respect in society as well. Education is not limited to campus I would like g...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...exposure outside the college by working part time to know more about the new work environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89866666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84058961016 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5217995315 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.214285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769629825138 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326370961813 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219759004885 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051775933661 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243601701728 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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