When children start school teachers have a bigger influence on their academic and social development compared to their parents. Do you agree or disagree with statement. Give your opinion with relevant examples.
Children are, without doubt, agile, fast learners and most vulnerable. Now, the statement sparks healthy discussion and arguments whether they are highly impressed by their teachers or not. I, personally, believe that teachers might have greater role to improve them academically, but their social development depend largely on their parents.
On the one hand, no one can deny when a student joins school, he or she comes in contact with their teachers and stay there for almost 6 to 7 hours. They improve their knowledge by having a look on books, watching videos and listening to the audios. It is but natural to learn new things about anything such as animals, alphabets, counting, painting and transport. What is more, their teachers teach them how all these things play significant and massive role in our day-to-day life. Admittedly, the toddlers automatically understand what, when, where, why and how these things are vital for them and the masses. Moreover, Learning new language and / or improving their own can also be seen as an academic impact of their tutors on their young minds. To prove my point, if these tiny tots are deprived of going to schools, they would most likely to remain unaware and backward academically.
On the other hand, their parents unlock the door of society and help them groom. It is parents who tell them who they are and their relationship with the people surrounded before they move to schools. They teach them not only social but moral values which are an integral part of society. For instance, I learnt the power of patience, not to think bad about others and believe in God at home from my mother, though she was illiterate. Along with what to do or not to do, they also learn their first language at home while playing and doing other activities with the members of their family. Thus, Home is rightly believed the first and the best school which is helpful in their social development.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that teachers work hard for the kids to learn things faster, to get higher marks and make them skillful academically, but in terms of knowing about society, parents have an edge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8777173913 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49963826967 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589673913043 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8440347051 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263302803633 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831784191103 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711587413445 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154613159641 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716476443111 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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