When a country develop its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the past fifty years, technology has brought a significant change to our lives. Some people believed that the development of technology will definitely result in the loss of traditional skills and ways of life, so it’s not worth preserving them, yet there still remains some arguments against this issue. Overall, it is my personal view that culture should indeed go along with the development of technology.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that technology is intimately bound up with ways of life and civilisation. The majority of inventions today originated from the demand of peop...
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The majority of inventions today originated from the demand of people
The majority of inventions today is originated from the demand of people
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it's not worth preserving them
it's not worth to preserve them
Sentence: Even more importantly, though culture in general and traditional skills in particular facilitate the ways of technology's development.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to particular and facilitate
takes human even long period of time.
takes human even a long period of time.
Sentence: First of all, it is an indisputable fact that technology is intimately bound up with ways of life and civilisation.
Error: civilisation Suggestion: civilization
Sentence: It is admitted that the civilisation has to go through a long process and definitely include the inherit from the previous generation's achievement and advise.
Error: civilisation Suggestion: civilization
Sentence: The disapearance of traditional skills particularly good skills, therefore, will make technology cease to develop, otherwise takes human even long period of time.
Error: disapearance Suggestion: disappearance
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