Music is very much important in representing societies cultures. A piece of music can enhance human lives' happiness. I strongly believe, folk music outweighs international music.
Music is a vital part of every creature of our planet. Animals and trees are also feels music of nature. In human's lives, every occasion they need music, which gives them vibrant in their lives. For instance, music is a part of weddings and funerals ceremonies, which has a huge impact to change our moods. However, in cinemas or in theater, we cannot imagine it without background music. Moreover, music can effect on animals behaviors. For example, ARIS, an animal research group shows that, when collecting milk from cows, if they listen to music during collection, they would yield more milk than regular time. In addition, music give us relaxation and peace into our monotony lives.
Traditional music always represent countries cultures and histories. A culture is nothing without music. Folk music enrich countries culture and provide knowledge about ancestors and their creations. For instance, music is significantly related with countries freedom fights or Independence. Nowadays, we can not imagine our independent days without national songs. Moreover, some music were created to unite their countrymen during liberation wars. Nowadays, young teenagers are more interested to listen hip-hop modern music. Hence, parents should aware of this and should influence their adolescents to listen traditional music, otherwise, they will have lack of knowledge about their countries histories.
In conclusion, music is important in our daily lives to get rid-off from monotonous lives. I strongly believe that traditional music is more important than modern music to preserve our cultures.
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." - rewrite 73
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that heard everywhere nowadays? 61
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... modern music to preserve our cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55514705882 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72108252664 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1153355282 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9523809524 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9523809524 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46760006067 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173450179193 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779239575183 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333186625864 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257435738594 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.08 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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