When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the
building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Many people believe that the crucial factor when constructing a building, is function outweigh outside architecture. In my opinion, the purpose of the building should follow its outward appearance, so I disagree which that statement.
The intended purpose of the building is very important. Firstly, when the houses are built by any place, its function is always the top priority. For example, the shaggy wall of opera houses sometimes is disgusting, but they are built to resonance with the singer voices and sort out the unwanted noises. Secondly, we also see several modern skyscrapers around large cities. Although these housing-high rise apartments are ugly, they are the only solution to supply accommodation for millions of people.
In the aesthetics perspective, the role of outward appearance should not be ignored by any means. When the lives of modern people are more and more prosperous today, they tend to find more about the meanings of the outside architecture of the building in which they are living. For instance, Landmark 81 is the building which locates at the center of Ho Chi Minh city of Vietnam. Its outside appearance based on bamboo's images which represent the images and nature of Vietnamese people. Besides, the Marina Bay Sands, which is located in Singapore, is iconic about the economic and cultural of this state country. It was constructed in an unmistakable appearance that three buildings stand together and a ship-shape' swimming pool was placed above of these buildings.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the view expressed in the statement and I think that the intended use of the building should go along with its outside architecture.
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- The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption. 78
- The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22058823529 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82727042304 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4913757849 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103140391698 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366009818597 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039422778359 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780566334077 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049213843926 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.