When families have a meal together, it is considered social activity. What are the advantages of a family meal? Do you think eating together is important to people in your country?
It is irrefutable that eating together is a social activity. Sharing dinner gives everyone a sense of identity. It can help ease day-to-day conflicts and establish traditions and memories that can last a lifetime. Eating together is significant to all families. In the following paragraph, I shall explain my viewpoint.
The first and foremost advantage of eating together is that it creates a sense of belonging. Conversations during the meal provide opportunities for the family to bond and learn from one another. It is a chance to share information and news of the day and give attention to children and teens. Family meals foster warmth, security, love, and feelings of belonging. It can be a unifying experience for all. Secondly, family mealtime is the perfect opportunity to teach appropriate table manners, etiquette, and social skills. Parents can be perfect role models, and children learn by following them. What is more, meals prepared and eaten at home are usually more nutritious and healthy. They contain more fruits, vegetables, dairy products, and nutrients such as fibre, calcium, vitamins A and C, and folate.
Furthermore, research shows that frequent family dinners are associated with lower rates of smoking, drinking, and illegal drug use in pre-teens and teenagers compared to families that eat together two or fewer times per week. Additionally, children do better in school when they eat more meals with their parents and family. For example, in the Philippines, most people do value shared mealtime. However, the fast-paced life and influence of the global culture are taking some away from this
custom. Fortunately, some recent studies have shown that even in developed countries, people realize the importance of family meals
and downshifting. It is time to bring the “family” to the dinner table.
To conclude, eating together is an important social activity. That is why it has been said that ‘The family that eats together stays together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Custom
...ture are taking some away from this custom. Fortunately, some recent studies have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my view, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32698412698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8474792484 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7326031373 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3181818182 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374943161414 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964284695387 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083562607156 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186465777454 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683817234514 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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