Advertising things like tv and sellphones are great marketing strategy. In addition, some people believe that advertisement is highly successful marketing policy .other believe, however, advertisement is common practice which every companies are trying, and people are not able to watch multiple commercial. This paragraph elucidate both the views along with my opinion.
To begin with, nowdays television is first mode of Communication which connect directly to the consumers and this is wealthy successful to companies because of different film actor star introduce products with their charm and individuals are supporting them , in other words, individuals but all the things which their preferred star launch. The huge money is spend on advertisement which attracts the someones attention . To exemplify, dairy milk chocolate is one of the most renowned brand in India and the reason behind is sharukh khan Indian actor famous for their great performances in different movies , additionally , dairy milk company use these fame to accelerate their market graph in upward motion. In addition, in the recent advertisement of chocolate have estimated budget of 95 lakh which is highest among all advertisement . Furthermore, in contemporary world many brand achieve their highest feet as well as , boost their products by using advertisement method , example for Maggie has 59% share of noodles industry among india . And money is spent on some advertisement are worth for brands in modern world as aforementioned the same example of it.
Whereas , second view is explain the interest rate of public among advert, moving further, some commercial are boring with no conflict in them is uncourage public to not watch them again To typify, trivago brand promotion level is stingy with minor changes in numerous advertisements has decrease the interest level among people. Moreover, some people think glamour does not define the quality of the product that is why people skip the Commercials.
In my opinion, present time the way product is commercialised on tv as well as in phones are cereate spark among people and they push limits to buy such things. I agree with first prespective because have more pros than cons.
To conclude , this essay depicts the how to accelerate the brand value and create interest among people with good advertisement . However, some of the announcements are dull because of their lack of ideas respectively .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37958115183 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90759387488 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568062827225 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0353815611 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4666666667 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230123538044 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828158187326 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587950522017 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135793331903 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749257756245 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.