When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterise a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
It is often considered that, determination of success is carried out by the popularity or wealth of a person. However, in my opinion, the facts of money or celebrity image would not be the criteria of a successful individual always. In turn, people who can live a life peacefully, fulfill the liability of family, reach to the life aim also valued by the term of success.
To begin with, the statement of richness or public figure may analysed as a characteristics of a successful person. Because, peoples believe that, the capitalists, or the celebrities has enough money and power to do everything according to their wishes. Make use of fame may lead them to an esteemed position in public, earning respects, prioritize in various fields and such things often believed as success in the eyes of public. However, many famous people were struggling with family relationships, break ups, untold stories of inner life, would be the failure of life. By the pressure of fame, many celebrity parents might be fail in front of their children in terms of bonding, teaching civility and probably the real meaning of life.
In my point of view, an ordinary man who have sustainable livelihood, safe, secure and peaceful life with his family, would be better to call successful person. In brief, bought up the children in well manner, educative, and make as a good citizen with love and affection physically and mentally would be the success of a person. There are many examples such as, India's number one IAS holder's father was an auto driver, a sweeper woman raised her son as a scientist and so on. Moreover, the meaning of success is splendid that how a person live a life, money and popularity might be mitigate in the later life. But the things which they did to oneself, family and society would be the exact success of person remained in throughout life.
To sum up, wealthy and prosperous life may give us some success in some point of view, not withstanding, a real life success is determined by the things which they given to others irrespective of face money and pride.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...the criteria of a successful individual always. In turn, people who can live a life pe...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a characteristic' or simply 'characteristics'?
Suggestion: a characteristic; characteristics
...chness or public figure may analysed as a characteristics of a successful person. Because, people...
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Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun celebrity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many celebrities'.
Suggestion: many celebrities
...ilure of life. By the pressure of fame, many celebrity parents might be fail in front of their...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve and affection physically and mentally would be the success of a person. There ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in brief, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81284916201 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70297117666 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7253291694 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179393784447 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727662943898 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342292051124 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121218800431 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369289516782 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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