The idea of some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural historical attractions in the country is widely debated, with many people claiming that the benefits it offers are no match for its drawbacks. However, I do not entirely accept this, and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of argument in front of my stance. One of the most conspicuous aspect of charging more to foreign visitors in comparison to local people when they vist the cultural and historical attractions in a country is that it will increasingly float more foreign investments. Not only they will spent more to visit such cultural and historical attractions, but they will spent more on our cultural food and wearings. Needless to say,all these merits as mentioned above with stand subject in good stead, when it comes to foreign visitors investments on once culture.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of the charging more from the foreign visitors on their visit to cultural and historical attractions in a country. The primary one lies in the fact that it may decrease the foreign visitors. Besides, that less visitor may lead to low investment of foreign currency in a country. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the charging more from the foreign visitors.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of topic are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...foreign investments. Not only they will spent more to visit such cultural and histori...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...d historical attractions, but they will spent more on our cultural food and wearings....
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
...tural food and wearings. Needless to say,all these merits as mentioned above with st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99604743083 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61200532653 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509881422925 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1100784368 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229788997346 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781704846805 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762229078762 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140926585288 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865935604455 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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