Whenever towns are planned it is important to build more public parks or sport facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time?To what extend do you agree?
In the contemporary epoch, there is a heated argument over the issue of building public parks instead of shopping centers for people to spend their leisure time. There is no iota of doubt over this that public park should be build within the cities. A majority of society favors it, however, the rest goes opposite to it. The following paragraph would highlight my perspective which will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement, I see eye to eye with the given aspect for multifarious reasons, first and foremost reason is that as population is growing and there is shortage of space so people save no private gardens. Therefore, public parks is a government property where everyone can visit for recreation. In addition to that, public park reduces pollution and makes the area clean, green and fresh.
Probing ahead, under town planning public parks are the priorities for the development of locality. To substantiate, children enjoy taking swings and slide and also play different games whereas old people do yoga and different exercises. Besides, under town planning, a separate area for the entertainment purpose of the people should be organized.
To recapitulate, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supplying that it is essential to have public parks so that public can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building public parks cannot be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22907488987 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75820884695 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1525099829 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288595514633 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101380665824 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884323828955 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16093078658 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367512223314 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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