Many a times, student struggle to manage the inevitable expenses while pursuing their academic courses. In that direction, they try to find out the available income generating sources which they can choose as per their suitability and can help them to stabilize their budgets. Such part- time job options not only help them to manage their expenses in a better way but also enhance their social as well as soft- skills which will really be helpful in future job context.
In my opinion, both merits and demerits are equally present there for such an approach, working, while being students. On bright side, it will really boost up their confidence level as they get exposure to work in a real life situation. It proves to be an actual learning of a particular work and they gain a useful experience. Moreover, they will learn about money management, sense of responsibility, workplace ethics and if working with others, they learn about teamwork and co- operation.
On the flip side,sometimes, it really take a toll on their health and to make both ends meet, they start neglecting their physical well- being. Besides this, it can also interfere with their academic performance as they will get lesser time to study. Their energy and time will be utilized at workplace which they could have devote to extra studies at the weekend.
To conclude, sometimes, it is really impossible to bear all the expenses of study without doing any work to earn some bucks but while working, students should seriously consider its consequences on their studies and overall health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
Many a times, student struggle to manage the inevita...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sometimes
...k and co- operation. On the flip side,sometimes, it really take a toll on their health ...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
... On the flip side,sometimes, it really take a toll on their health and to make both...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'devoted'.
Suggestion: devoted
...ized at workplace which they could have devote to extra studies at the weekend. To ...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk to earn some bucks but while working, students should seriously consider its c...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...heir studies and overall health. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04580152672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60457661454 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2524878235 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.181818182 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137608443849 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053631139918 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399593820863 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089622176887 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304547328642 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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