Why do you think some people attracted to dangerous sport or dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
attracting towards dangerous activities is the latest trend followed by the society. this essay will highlight some indispensable reasons towards these sort of perilous activities.
Firstly, nowadays generation has been coming under the influence of media rapidly. There are a lot of channels on television and YouTube which exhibits the thrilled tasks done by professionals. Thus, people get attracted towards these and they try to imitate such activities. But unfortunately myriad of volunteers become the victims of accidents.
Secondly, the major reason of attachment towards these detrimental activities is the cash amount offered by some unauthorized agencies which conduct these events. A host of unemployed grownups get allured to the money of adventurous sports and get enthusiasm to attempt such challenges.
In conclusion, this essay highlighted the vital reasons of attraction that can be prize amount of the sports and influence of such prominent personalities which are highly covered by media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71523178808 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06202421301 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1472132212 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152229455458 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588467137742 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581118910394 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939518760677 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481620349035 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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