With the wide use of computers and the Internet, people can study and work from home without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays, the Internet has changed the way that information is shared and approached, but it has also caused problems that did not exist previously. One of the most serious issues associated with the Internet is lack of privacy and security and a viable solution is improving cybersecurity measures to protect people from cybercrime.
The internet development means that information, especially personal information, is approached in an effortless way. When people go shopping online or registering in social media applications, they have to share their individual information. It is the kind of information that supposed to be confidential before, now it can be revealed easily. This is the huge opportunities for scammers to take advantages of that personal data to do bad things such as imitating and borrowing money. For example, since the Internet was invented and improved, there have been much more cybercrime associated with individual information than before in Vietnam that make people lose their money much.
A solution for that problem is strengthening cybersecurity measures and raising users awareness. A shop, an application, a company,ect that has online activity should be requested to accomplish a test related to cybersecurity for users to operate. This procedure can be launched and managed by the government. In addition, people should be educated about online safety and comply the regulations about personal data protection. They should be caution about the information they share online and use strong passwords for their accounts. For instance, Singapore has applied many policy related to online security for people and launched some campaign to increase residents’ awareness about protecting personal information. Therefore, Singapore is considered as one of the countries with a low rate of cybercrime compare to other countries.
In conclusion, there are variety issues that associated with the Internet, one of the most critical problem is lack of personal information security. One way to address this problem is to develop cybersecurity measures and enhance people’s knowledge about safety in using the Internet.
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- With the wide use of computers and the Internet people can study and work from home without going to school or company Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effortless way" with adverb for "effortless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lly personal information, is approached in an effortless way. When people go shopping online or regi...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
...ning cybersecurity measures and raising users awareness. A shop, an application, a co...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ect
...eness. A shop, an application, a company,ect that has online activity should be requ...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cautioned'?
Suggestion: cautioned
...ersonal data protection. They should be caution about the information they share online...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay to address this problem is to develop cybersecurity measures and enhance peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5993883792 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13530982223 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529051987768 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8966666567 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13151698595 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045326548299 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303185924996 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930181197018 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273587983026 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.