Common utilization of the internet has been a phenomenal topic of debate in recent years. This alarming trend has given a variety of outcomes. It should be addressed by a number of effective actions.
Several consequences are given rise to by general using the web. First and foremost, widespread exploitation of the internet cause a bigger gap in real relationships. The internet is gradually common and become an inescapable thing in almost all people’s life so more and more people would be lazy to hang out, or even have an outside meeting, people are still glued to smartphones or laptop screens, which makes people separate from others. Another major problem is harming the mental health of people. For instance, when people have a mistake, only posting to social media, people would undergo attacks. It is called “cyberbullying”, is the reason for some mental diseases, even deaths.
However, several actions are recommended to tackle this issue. One good idea is that the government should enact a strict law about network security, to prevent toxic elements on the internet from people. By doing this, the vulnerable people rate due to the Internet would minimize considerably. Another possibility is that people should spend their time discovering life, self, or bonding with beloved ones. As a result, people avoid isolating some relationships and have a complete perception of their surroundings and personality.
In conclusion, the general use of the internet has caused various consequences to human life. However, actions should be taken by people to lessen the impacts of this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30739299611 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92614765192 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7061634987 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886409346236 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326841228604 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392168056364 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526287226416 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021239339631 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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