Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that these days many people harbor a concern that spend money on protecting wild animals is a waste. I completely disagree with this pointless view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that animals do not have place in 21st century. Firstable, I do not believe that Earth existence is only for the benefits of humans life, hence, there is nothing special in the humans right that afford people to become listless for the extinction of animals. Moreover, there is no reason why we should encourage or allow the animals death. We do not need to exploit or destroy any last metre of land in order to accommodate or feed the world's population. There is plenty of way that we can live a peaceful life with the animals.
Not only I disagree with the standpoint that the money spend on the protection of wild animals is a waste of resources, but also natural resources especially wild animals is a pivotal part of human life. From the prehistoric times, people use animal meats as the primary source of food, as a result, human life can be in danger by the lack of protein that provided by meat. Furthermore, encourage the danger of animals and their natural habitats can badly affect to human existence. For instance, in the begining of 2020, there is a huge wildfire in Amazon where is known as the lungs of world, which produce a paramount of oxygen on an annual basis, also adsorb the carbon dioxide, and stabilise the Earth's climate. Consequently, the costs of managing the resulting changes of this wildfire by far outweigh the costs of conservation. Finally, protecting wild animals and their habitats is a way of maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not animals should exist, and I believe that we should to everything to protect the wild animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...special in the humans right that afford people to become listless for the extinction o...
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Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...on why we should encourage or allow the animals death. We do not need to exploit or des...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...and in order to accommodate or feed the worlds population. There is plenty of way that...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not animals should exist, and I believe tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68111455108 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58769084887 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513931888545 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.808854821 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224032909376 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781818021546 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783061448615 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135984718052 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00973581326054 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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