the paragraph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010

Essay topics:

the paragraph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart compares oil production on a daily basis in 6 different Gulf countries namely Iran, Iraq, Qatar, Kuwait, Saudi Arabia, and UAE from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, while Saudi Arabia's oil production capacity always by far higher than other countries, the number of oil barrels in others countries were nearly the same amount. Also, there was predicted to be increased by all countries throughout 2 decades period.
As the paragraph suggests, Saudi Arabia amount of produced oil was significantly higher than other countries started with 8 millions of barrels per day and rose to more than 14 million in 2 decades. As an opposed, Qatar's oil production hit a peak in the year 2000 at 1 millions of barrels but still by far lower than the others.
Oil generating capacity in Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, and UAE almost the same in the year 2000 around 2-3 millions per day. Therefore, throughout the period, there were an increased in all countries and reached about 4 millions of barrels. In addition, Iran's production always higher than that number of Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, and UAE.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...igher than other countries started with 8 millions of barrels per day and rose to more than 1...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed, Qatars oil production hit a peak in the year 2000 at 1 millions of barrels b...
^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 million'.
Suggestion: 1 million
...duction hit a peak in the year 2000 at 1 millions of barrels but still by far lower than the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
...ased in all countries and reached about 4 millions of barrels. In addition, Irans production ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57016558653 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5511200239 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207866263962 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939693422778 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616110048589 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143570723264 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545654151013 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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