the word is filled with material waste, Is this really happening. Give relevent solutions.
The deterioration of the Enviroment is unarguably linked with the overuse of plastic bags and other waste. There are a number of problems that people suffer as a results of this real and harmful trend, but also some straightforward measures we can take to abate the negativity.
perhaps the worst current problem stemming from this is the unmanageable sanitation of the Earth. Since the waste has a tendency to file up while the waste treatment and sewage disposal is inefficient, this trend poses a huge threat in human beings' civilization. If one day the Earth is filled with material waste, we may have to search for another planet suitable for human's resettlement, which seems unattainable in foreseeable future. A further problem is the fact that our overdependence on materials can lead to the depletion of non-renewable resources. This would be impactful on the well-being of the soil and water, which directly results in damages in other ares such as agriculture or commercial transportation.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to raise personal awareness. Individuals all over the world should share collective responsibility towards the enviroment by reducing their own daily waste, which can be achieved by practing the three "R"s : reduce, reuse and recycle. Another way of contributing global conservation is to take part in Government's enviroment initiatives in order to spread the environmental messages. Secondly, countries worldwide can join forces, make concerted effort and solidarity movement.Thus, wealth countries are able to help underdeveloped nations, where economic developments are often placed ahead of enviromental protections
Overall, problems caused are both the loss of land due to waste piled up and the depletion of resources. However, there are solutions involving coordinated action by individuals and the state
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...umber of problems that people suffer as a results of this real and harmful trend, but als...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Perhaps
...e can take to abate the negativity. perhaps the worst current problem stemming from...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...this trend poses a huge threat in human beings civilization. If one day the Earth is f...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...oncerted effort and solidarity movement.Thus, wealth countries are able to help unde...
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Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...placed ahead of enviromental protections Overall, problems caused are both the lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56206896552 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27583526816 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658620689655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7237033837 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.416666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134990878666 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044281369984 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403482814962 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673246471444 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053496024345 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.