world become global village some think it has many benefits other suggest it has no benefit. discuss both points of view
In this twentieth century, globalisation means; when the work become integrated economically, socially, politically ,and culturally through advancement in technology, transportation and communication. one of the most controversial issue today relates to globalisation. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On the one side of argument, there are people who believe that there are myriad merits of globalisation. The main reason for believing this is that if the universe become global village, economy of local area increase in many positive ways. Most of businesses are increasing internationally. Moreover, with growth in economy there will be dynamic increase in employment so that productivity will be increased. Which automatically rocket up the growth of that country. It is also possible to say that with globalisation all the dwellers become equal. There will be no discrimination. Furthermore, bonding between among the all nations also tighten. One good epitome for this is survey conducted by Times of India who reported that with the globalisation, when learners go all around the world for higher education there will be no biasing and no partiality between students because globally all masses are equal ,and have same rights.
On the other side of coin, nobody can deny the hazards effect of globalisation. With the globalisation, there will be cut throat competition between small businesses and multinational businesses. Thus small businesses may have to close down. As a result globalisation may leads to unemployment ,and exploitation of lower and middle standard people. Coca-Cola company in India is one good illustration for this is, with globalisation there may have number of new products in the market ,and people have plethora of choices. At that moment, how long Coca-Cola company will be survived? Small scale industries will be closed.
As we have seen, there are number of answer to this question. on balance however, I tend to believe that globalisation play increasingly role in our life but one should have to develop in such manner that one do not play with human rights, ethics and believe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16082855454 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.0898650003 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076742035286 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219393501449 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351493484675 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043795428422 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386096355937 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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