AS the world becomes technologically advanced computers are replacing more and more jobs .
describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers , and discuss at least one problem that may result .
GIVE reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience write at least 250 words.
It is generally accepted that technology spread its arms everywhere in the world and its changes our culture , social as well as our lifestyle . computers are used everywhere like at work places , homes and so on . It is argued that different types of jobs are likely to be replaced by computer . I will computer along with problems.
To begin with , there are manifold jobs which are demolished by computer. First and foremost is technology is teacher are being replaced by projector system is classroom and students prefer to learn from technology with interesting way . For instance UNO report says 75% of school used advanced technology learning new things in the classroom which effect the lost of teacher position in the future. Thus a child became addicted to learn from technology which increase the usage of computer more as compared to past.
Next the position of sale service , management , retail sales person and accountant may be lost on account of computer . After this , jobs of postmen are also endanger cause of emails which is most prefer by people nowadays also position or cashier in supermarket as more folks give money through plastic card on online payment apps.
There are multifarious problems that are introducing by enrollment of computers . Firstly the introduction of computer increase the rate of unemployment . For example , technology take the position of people and they lost their jobs by computers. Lastly , people comment crimes as they have free from there work and for livelihood they have to do such thing like robbery . This crimes increases due to unemployment .
TO conclude as there are some jobs which are done only by people so authority have to put some steps to increases that jobs which are replaced by the computers so that they can earn money and live better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66425439516 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1654519294 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30657232101 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958294706817 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532389560753 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157095414694 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165840997021 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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