As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs.
describe some job positions that ,may be lost because of computers,and discuss atleast one problem that may result.
Give reason to your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern globe people can not be assumed anything. Advancement into Technology connect the world globally.Due to scientific development and innovation around the world, immensely population are getting unemployed and all the jobs are carrying by the automated machine.This essay describes the some profiles which has lost the platforms and also explaining the example and reason behind it.
The revolution into the technology and science impacted the human life especially because group of people are becoming jobless. Just like a ticket makers has out of job because of every station has automated ticket withdraw machines, additionally all the handmade crafts and design factories and small businesses has been shutting down day by day due to all the work is to be done by the machines which is fast and with good clarity. Moreover more than the half of the portion of education is on online platform teachers are not required more cause a one time expert lectures has recorded and circulates all over the world which makes teachers between the jobs.
On the other side Artificial Intelligence plays vital role in the technology advancement. Nowadays almost employed in call centers has become job less due to automated answer feature. No more staff required for the centers. These statement can be understood by an example:- While talking to a person, he said ,"He was getting problem with voice call. He spoke with customer support and suddenly call has redirected to self answer chat and all his queries got resolved within minute then, he got realized that how technology replacing the human effort ferociously.
Sum up all, as the world makes notable progression in the field of Science there are awful consequences.It can result in skyrocketing unemployment among the laborers and will have a blatant effect on the economies of the rising countries across the globe. And over intelligence in any field can lead to the extinction of the human realm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78273134708 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6991324792 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202536412964 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630705976469 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376141448821 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109072297504 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428355397653 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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