The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for the poor, underdeveloped countries, but also for industrialised developed countries.
What are the problems that overpopulation causes? Give solutions.
ln most countries of the world, the population is increasing alarmingly. The problem of overpopulation has attracted growing concern among people of insight. This essay would like to discuss the issue and give possible solutions.
The most serious problem overpopulation can bring about lies in the fact that it is difficult to provide enough food to feed the ever-increasing population. While the food production keeps increasing with the development of science and technology in farming and animal husbandry, the population of the world has created even greater demand on food supply. Compounded by frequent natural disasters and famines, especially in Africa, it is not uncommon to find some people on the edge of starvation.
In addition, population explosion has exerted great pressure on infrastructure of any country. A large population means more demand for education, medical care, transport, and energy consumption. As a result, it is very difficult for governments to provide effective public services in crowded cities Moreover, there is usually a higher crime rate, attributable to high rates of unemployment, thus downgrading the quality of people's lives.
There are two major solutions to the overpopulation problem. Firstly, better education for women can reduce birth rate as more women will be busily engaged in work and they are lkely to have fewer children or delay their age of pregnancy. Another effective way may rest with the governments, which must educate their citizens about the dangers of a large pepulation and provide incentives to those who limit the size of their familes. For example, the Chinese gov- ernment has practised the policy of "One couple one child", which has achieved great success in the recent two decades in reducing the population. In return, the quality of life has been grealy improved in China.
In conclusion, therefore, overpopulation can lead to starvation and degradation of people's quality of life. If the world governments take effective measures, the werld population can be stabilised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ln
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44859813084 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.062668141 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610591900312 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9808840141 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205180746257 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671419834624 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614703179997 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110100228809 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595456921664 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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