In the world the majority of people waste considerable food everyday.
Explain why this is happening and give solutions for this problem.
While millions people all around the world are suffering from starving, on the other side of the Earth we witness a vast number of citizens in developing countries are consuming food in excess. In this essay, I aim to explore more about roots of this issue and possible ways we can reduce this annoying habit as follows.
First of all, I personally believe that the economic conditions determine the food consuming style. One good example of this trend related to wealthy lands namely the UK and the US. However there are always exceptions to every rules as it has observed people who living in rich territories follow up their culture and traditions that they have inherited from the prior generations like Japan which is one of the pioneers in eating the nutritious substances as they never throw away the leftover.
Further and even more importantly, though, this is a problem that I do not imagine solutions in the short term. Nevertheless, a few of measures can be taken by government as well as ordinary people to decrease the side effects of this disturbing manner. Food stamp is one of the alternative which authorities provide for poor people in order to feed them. Nonetheless, this approach is not able to cover all people. Preparing the free food with ultimate expiry date in chain stores for consumers who can not afford their requirements is highly practical. Canada is one of the countries has located in the top level in this trend.
To conclude, I should state my position that preventing is always more beneficial than treatment. consumption pattern must be altered and guys who indulge in nutrients should be informed many thousand children are hungry and looking for international food organizations like FAO to be survived from the lack of the food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...wealthy lands namely the UK and the US. However there are always exceptions to every ru...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consumption
... always more beneficial than treatment. consumption pattern must be altered and guys who in...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be survived from the lack of the food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71452062476 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.725691069 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246815752878 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828092805491 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472373615075 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137645542523 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795680767381 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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