The world's most urgent problem is caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, population is increasing at an alarming rate all over the globe. As prescribed in the assertion, the most serious trouble is caused as a result of overpopulation. I accord
with the given statement, this phenomenon has negative impacts not only on civilians life but also on ecology.This essay would shed light on my views in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
To commence with, there are manifest points to mention why I agree with the assigned statement, this trend have ample of adverse impacts on the life of human beings. First and foremost, lack of accommodation places for individuals to live. To demonstrate, if population will continue to arise especially in metropolitan cities such as in Mumbai and Delhi, which have been already flooded with citizens when the demand for housing will not be meet. As a result, masses will tend to build their shelter in red zone regions such as on river banks. Moreover, one of considerable point is to mention is that, rise in the level of unemployment as masses have not enough jobs to generate their bread and butter which is essential for living purposes as, a consequence, they tend to indulge in wrong type of activities such as crime and robbery which will spoil their future.
Furthermore, this phenomenon has negative influence on the ecology as well.Firstly, in this hectic world, individuals opt their personal motorbikes and cars to reach out their destination , and these vehicles emit harmful chemicals in the form of smoke. In this way, environment gets contaminated.Secondly, in order to provide to fulfill the requirements of the masses related to housing and jobs, plants will be cut down. Hence, the natural habitat of the wild species will demolish, these wild species will come in endangered list due to whole food chain will disturb, it may create ecological imbalance. Consequently, it will put deleterious effect on ecology on human beings too.
To recapitulate, I conceive that majority of the troubles are spreading its roots due to overpopulation all over the world; however, I assert that rational approach should be implemented with the collective efforts of regime and individuals to restrain this trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99725274725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91195702588 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 364.0 20.2975951904 1793% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1819.0 106.682146367 1705% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 364.0 20.7667163134 1753% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 128.0 7.06120827912 1813% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569804629916 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569804629916 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418837340827 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437101237846 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 184.1 13.0946893788 1406% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -297.98 50.2224549098 -593% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 145.3 11.3001002004 1286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.2 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.99 8.58950901804 303% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 147.6 10.1190380762 1459% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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