The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future.
The diversity of occupation is experiencing radical changes, which no longer allows the current status to be reliable for individuals in the long run. The catalysts behind this transition are indeed prominent and anticipations are necessary for workers to deal with any possibilities.
For one thing, the most evident transformation could be seen in the human resource department. Employees now have to face more demanding standards of companies to attain a rewarding vacancy. In the past, job applicants were given to choosing a stable occupation with a college degree or applying for a position in state agencies, at which their professions are not usually required. They received a sufficient income to cover the basic living costs and accumulate their own wealth for retirement. However, this is no longer true for the present as businesses are in search of candidates who possess diverse skill sets as well as readily exert themselves for the sake of the company. Another change occurs in the manufacturing process, given the fact that human labor force is gradually becoming redundant due to automation. Machinery outpace workers but simultaneously ensure productivity and quality thanks to their superior work capabilities.
For another, preparation is vital for workers so as to ensure their lives. Firstly, individuals must acknowledge their weaknesses in order to improve in tandem with cultivating their strengths, especially the graduates, who are going to embrace the adult world. Distinctiveness is the key to capture the recruiters’ attention, which is deemed a huge competitive edge to surpass other rivals, as long as those skills benefit the company. Secondly, job seekers should equip themselves with more knowledge about different fields. Collective understanding could be an useful tool in case of financial predicaments as smart people are always able to generate their own values to make a living without reliance on employment.
To conclude, there is a substantial shift in the job market, with regards to the growing emphasis on recruitment and automation. Nonetheless, individuals could be well-prepared when adopting the aforementioned measures to cope with future scenarios.
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think students should spend time on important subjects Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 89
- Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees Why are these laws introduced Do you think they are a positive or negative development 84
- Watching a live performance such as a play concert or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have to face more demanding standards of companies to attain a rewarding vacancy....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ks to their superior work capabilities. For another, preparation is vital for wo...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...other, preparation is vital for workers so as to ensure their lives. Firstly, individual...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...elds. Collective understanding could be an useful tool in case of financial predic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5191740413 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18029671666 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631268436578 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2405523463 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180670624094 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532771755947 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407199631202 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095895004658 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408657563417 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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