Some people think that the main benefit of greater international cooperation is the environment of protection. However, others believe that the main benefit is the world of business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is indisputable that cooperation between nations across the globe has seen economic prosperity in recent decades. To others, it weighs more on environmental conservation. I would concur with the former view on the grounds that its economical merits are more evident.
For one, the united effort from various organizations along with governments could alleviate environmental issues in the global context within a firm. As cooperation brings about opportunities to exchange viable solutions and perspectives from diverse visions of specialists and experts, more viable solutions could be suggested and combined into practices. For instance, through conferences with foreign environmentalists, Viet Nam has successfully prevented floods in the coastal areas thanks to their measures in reconstructing and upgrading the hydraulic systems to deal with the catastrophe. As a result, ecological crises could be more effectively surmounted in comparison with individual endeavors to address the problems.
For another, in regards to the business domain, the extra increment in the social economy could be enriched by international trades prompted by modern industrial civilization in tandem with overseas business development facilitated by governments. Enterprises are allowed to penetrate new markets and even potentially dominate the competition in some particular regions through brand awareness. Not only the sales market could be expanded but also the job market is. Consequently, the competition for rewarding vacancies could be less fierce had the offshore investment in manufacturing for lower labor cost resulted in more jobs are engendered. Both of which will bolster the overall national economic growth.
To conclude, although both views have some certain validity, I would concede that international cooperation gives rise to the economic sector rather than the environment protection solely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9347826087 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25726048263 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5227864652 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894899188296 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312510844701 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532254106493 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748163448296 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761158145822 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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