The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. This statement is very relevant if we look at different industries and work places today.
One main possible cause of changing work is development in science and technology. Due to New technologies and developments , new skills are required to work on new platforms and machines. As new machines and platforms are more efficient and productive than old machines. Therefore, Employers prefer to implement new machines and technologies in their compnaies so as to get maximum output and profits. From consumer demand to manufacturing process everything is changing. So industries are making themselves capable to meet the needs of changing market.
It becomes very critical for employees to upgrade their skills according to changing industry and technology. Employees needs to be very aware about their skills and industry they are working in. They need to be properly updated about any recent development and any distruptive innovation that can effect their industry directly or indirectly.
One possible way to prepare people for future work is corporate training. Corporates can train their employess substaintially with time according to any new technology. If there are chances of automation in a particular sector. Then Employees can be reskilled.
Lets take example of Software industry, 1990's there was huge demand of java programmers in market, but due to evolution of new technologies and lprogramming languages. Demand of java professionals reduced with time. Some people lost their jobs as companies moved to new language platforms. But some employees learned new languages and skills.
It can be concluded that market and industries are changing rapidly. To prepare people for future jobs, individual as well as corprate efforts needs to be made so as to make sure people are ready for changing work , new skills and new market.
- The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future. 56
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Due to New technologies and developments , new skills are required to work on new ...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nes and technologies in their compnaies so as to get maximum output and profits. It ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h time according to any new technology. If there are chances of automation in a pa...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ll as corprate efforts needs to be made so as to make sure people are ready for changing...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sure people are ready for changing work , new skills and new market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31517509728 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92857079228 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52140077821 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1225148657 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379927183523 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126364128875 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197135214823 0.0667982634062 295% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22079734736 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144100998068 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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