World would be a better place if more women were in leadership positions . To what extent you agree or disagree .
Equilibrium of earth more preferable when a woman being head in some field. I totally agree with this notion and think that in case of head gender is not important.
First of all, even the man being a head that is nothing guarantee will able to creating some development againts what is the responsibility of him. In other words, no matter the gender, the importance one is intelligence of someone, because a head need a lot of knowledge to improve the lack of region. Moreover, point of view is very important to analyze what is the big problem that occur in recently and taking the best way to sovling all the problem without adverse another side is the crucial thing. For instance, Susi pudji astuti that was former of ministry marine and fishery in Indonesia, she eminent with her assertive to taking some wisdom and she is very wise to making a decision until all of people who working in her underneath will obey with everything that she said, even she has capable to sink foreign sail if was anchored in Indonesia sea. That's why everyone can be head of some institute because taking decision is depend from who make it whether guy or girl.
Secondly, discrimination of gender was became prevalent in all circle such as government, society or another level of people. Majority of people have insight that a woman not able to creating welfare of poor society and can't generating some progress in a terrain. Whereas, average of people forget that many head of women reaching successful when her served and that was proved a woman can bring a new situation. For example, Illiza Saadudin Jamal was a city representative, in Aceh, she being someone with a million inspiration for teenagers, since she working as a head, Banda Aceh far from bad news because she was success to made renovation againts previous asymmetry. Thus, a head should be have capable to organise the region, make the stabilisation of the situation and be brave to taking decision.
To conclude, step by step was visible that nothing discrimination to gender if want to be a head, because all of that is depend how the person pick the way and what is the best method to handle all of disorder in some place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: depended
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to creating welfare of poor society and cant generating some progress in a terrain. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun head seems to be countable; consider using: 'many heads'.
Suggestion: many heads
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: had
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Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69973890339 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62880848723 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535248041775 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1527541777 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.461538462 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4615384615 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811041768807 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350406741852 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307914233688 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636122802548 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213389250532 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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