Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more material and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal.
Majority of people think that the pupose of every countries is for generating more substance and item. I fully agree with this opinion and think that some nation should be increasing the productivity to encourages progress of nation.
First of all, creating independent country and have ability to contend with another country foremost advanced country. In other words, when some country can to bearing subtances by own self it was proved that they are prefer to using what notion having and thinking to prompting industry without import from another country. Indonesia is one of the big land in the world to producing oil palm with this achievement Indonesia can make all of product what the society need. For instance, with the million hectare of palm trees in every region in Indonesia was giving some evidence that Indonesia not necessary for import oil from another country even Indonesia have capable to ekspor this product until each nations in the world. That's why every nations should be focus to generating some product from source of nature abundance.
Secondly, the most highly of produce the items can be increasing revenue of the country. On the other hand, every items it is generated by country will be enhanced total of item that's to ekspor as a result the country could be obtaining the best value on global market because was succeed to rise up the sell. Whereas, the lack of Indonesia is the lower of human resources and because of this reason very intricately for Indonesia to yields the best quality of every product. For example, almost manufactory in Indonesia still consumption the raw item from overseas, in fact Indonesia with the biggest natural sources have capability to created some raw item by own self, but the lowest of shortage became all human dependence with another country and decided to get it in instant way. Thus, when some country pick to do import from another country it is can be increasing expenditure of the country, otherwise if the country focus to do ekspor that can make their earnings so higher.
To conclude, every country should be thinking about the best strategic to give excellent growth and one of the most popular methods is through resulting substances and items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
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Message: Did you mean 'use'?
Suggestion: use
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
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Suggestion: that's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...best value on global market because was succeed to rise up the sell. Whereas, the lack ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95721925134 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47808894496 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508021390374 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4670860046 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.615384615 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7692307692 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185129499245 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845140490838 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399067492784 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134824484146 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371390550322 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.