Write about the following topic
In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is true that there are huge amounts of wasted food in many countries than it used to and there are many reason made people do that way. While this is a serious problem, it can be solve by some of my point below.
There are some reason that people tent to overtake food more than their demand. Greed is a human trait, even if we do not mean to, sometimes, we still want more to get ourselves advantages. Moreover, the abundant of resources make people became waste and unrespect what we got. People alway think about themself and rarely think to the poor and hunger, although they are needer food than the other. After using food, most of dishes are not cleaned and sometime there are still enough food to make a meal for the others. Consequence of this issue is while the food had been through away, the hunger still hungry. This may cause many society's vices such as thieve, robbery or some else.
The answer is that we must be stricter and that food waste must carry a penalty. If guests order too much food or leave too much food on their plates, a restaurant may double the price they charge them. Another alternative is for people to continue their practice of making a brief list of the foods or items they actually need before going shopping. As a result, less food would need to be wasted since customers would have more time to plan ahead and make informed decisions about what food to buy.
In conclusion, the two main causes of the enormous amount of food wasted nowadays are food abundance and people awareness about food waste. Fortunately, there are a number of practical options to deal with this problem, such as punish people who throw away food and creating habit by making shopping lists.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...countries than it used to and there are many reason made people do that way. While this is ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the dishes') or simply say ''most dishes''.
Suggestion: most of the dishes; most dishes
... food than the other. After using food, most of dishes are not cleaned and sometime there are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: THROUGH_AWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throw'?
Suggestion: throw
...f this issue is while the food had been through away, the hunger still hungry. This may...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54692556634 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15950984882 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7430477404 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407188283099 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140675641322 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865688716911 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271634446481 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032336229184 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...countries than it used to and there are many reason made people do that way. While this is ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the dishes') or simply say ''most dishes''.
Suggestion: most of the dishes; most dishes
... food than the other. After using food, most of dishes are not cleaned and sometime there are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: THROUGH_AWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throw'?
Suggestion: throw
...f this issue is while the food had been through away, the hunger still hungry. This may...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54692556634 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15950984882 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7430477404 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407188283099 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140675641322 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865688716911 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271634446481 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032336229184 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.