You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Many people claim that men are worse in leadership and the women do this better. In my opinion, I do not agree this statement and believe the chance for these two gender is balance. There are some points to clearify my idea.
On the one hand, there are many case that woman could do really good in leading. With a woman manager, the task may go smoothie not only by their talent, but also because of her gender. According to the Bussiness Journal, in negotiate, there will be 3 of 5 woman could have the contract with partner while ther would be 2 of 5 if the negotiator are man. Moreover, the woman leader are detailed, careful in many aspect and they could deal with work in gentle way.
On the other hand, man could also be a great leader. Although woman are great, but they may distract by many element. For instant, life, family, children, parents, judging from social, colleague, … are things that a woman be distraction, a man could eliminate surrounded things and focus in what he has to do. And if a woman manager, sometime, they have a slight unfriendly from their employee if compared with a man leader.
All after all, both man and woman have their own pros and cons when they being a leader. Having an sympathy and balance bethween these two gender could make not only the working environment be easier but also develop the ideal world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
...fy my idea. On the one hand, there are many case that woman could do really good in lead...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...e woman leader are detailed, careful in many aspect and they could deal with work in gentle...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun element seems to be countable; consider using: 'many elements'.
Suggestion: many elements
...man are great, but they may distract by many element. For instant, life, family, children, p...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d cons when they being a leader. Having an sympathy and balance bethween these two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, after all, as to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5387755102 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30637166795 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579591836735 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.206732686 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5384615385 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1207581618 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532297906857 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062681855322 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915147409259 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910236632816 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.