Write about the following topic. Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people hold the belief that the buildings were carefully designed to last a long time and are worth owning by themself. Firstly, better safe than sorry, this group has concerns about quality and the age of accommodation, where they live should have a dating model and be still used for a long time. Secondly, for investors or businesses, the last long time building can make a huge profit in property prices and rents. Consequently, many people think the material should be inflexible as well.
On the one hand, from the financial point of view, owning an affordable building is better for the general population, for instance, who bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities. People who not only pay for housing but also food, bills, health care, and necessities want to have available accommodation prices. This is attributed to having a reasonable quality of life. So that is why they think the accommodation should be completed rapidly and available affording.
To conclude, there exist two points of view about accommodation, which are cost and quality of buildings. The demand for housing depends on each other’s making a choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0890052356 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88557206406 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5156293761 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237901412094 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915726048972 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055410778994 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148420576678 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693380360903 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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