Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
There have been a heated argument on whether it is appropriate to say that computers are the most crucial thing humanity has created over the last century. From my viewpoint, I would agree with the statement. This essay will express my answer, give reasons to my answer to come to a reasonable conclusion.
In the first place, it is undeniable that computers have been the key to a fast and accessible way of communicating. Before computers, it was nearly impossible for one to constantly keep track of your beloved relatives and social relationships. But now, with the era of computers, people can easily communicate with others even from a great distance, therefore keeping us updated on our social life. For instance, in the September 11th attack, computer lifted the burden of relatives of the survivors, worrying if their loved ones are affectded by the incident by providing a fast way of communicating through online messages.
Moreover, computer has play its role in the development of the human race as one of the most efficient and versatile tool. The ability to solve math problems precisely and rapidly, alongside with its ability to store information perfectly without affecting their quality has made computers the inevitable worktool for the modern man. In the 90s and the 00s, computer was considered the superior tool in office and in factories, being the main motivation for them to run smoothly. Imagine if all the computers are gone, the workload would become impossible for human to handle
With all the reasons and examples above, I have explained my choice of computers as the most crucial invention in the last century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat computers are the most crucial thing humanity has created over the last centu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03296703297 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82905324186 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6537104404 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224734995789 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802491094087 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460156709768 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141088105826 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477662471288 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.