Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is of no doubt, computers have revolutionized technology during the past few decades to up till now. I strongly agree that although usage of computers is very significant innovation of this time, it has also led to negative effects in the society as well.
On the positive side, the development of computers has great advantages for the general public. The younger generation uses computers more often on daily such as Yahoo and Twitter are greatly used by youngsters for conveying messages and video talk purposes which is essential for better communication all over the globe. It is also vital for those people who work in the office where technical work is needed, for example, laptops are necessary for sketching of the framework in the construction of buildings. And with online internet and online banking, our life becomes much easier compared to past all due to advancement in it.
However, on the opposite side, it also has some detrimental impacts on our life. Today people are living in isolation due to these developments. Personal interaction becomes limited, for instance, public gatherings and festivals are not celebrated with great zeal and zest due to the limited number of individuals. Another fact is that now newspaper reading is also get scared due to these gadgets. It also affects the mental and psychological health of youngsters who are keener using it. It excessive usage not only cause a headache but also depression because they are untouched with everyone else around them. They do not know what is going all around them. Computer users also lack essential mechanical and labour skills which are considered very dangerous for this modern era. So it is also damaging for youth.
To conclude, Computers are an essential discovery of mankind up till now and I believe It has both good and bad features for the human race.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... computers has great advantages for the general public. The younger generation uses computers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02265372168 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74299289326 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0449407408 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110345145958 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355110353225 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025468421218 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659054869312 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016493193191 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.