Write about the following topic?
Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.
What problems dos this shortage cause
What measures could be taken to overcome these problems
At current years the lack of fresh water supply has become an important matter around the globe, it is even being considered a global issue, so this subject is having a continuous increasing importance due its impact at population, industries and environment mainly.
Considering this scenario I will give some examples of the perceived impacts it can cause and possible solutions to be implemented.
The decrease of water availability generates many consequences and problems. For instance, in countries as Brazil, not having enough water increases the energy costs for the Brazilian population, since the electrical energy supplier relies on water sources to be running at full capacity. This situation also impacts the quality of drinking water, since you drain the bottom limit water supplies and studies demonstrate they have poor minerals quality and excess of physical and chemical contaminants. Another critical implication is the possibility to directly impact the environment, since exploring aquifers more than their natural capacity can compromise the availability of water for a long period of time, or even permanently.
Considering all the implications the shortage of water can cause, the better, more intelligent and sustainable option could be to invest at technical capabilities for the population and public managers. This would generate knowledge about correct conducts and a positive engagement for people to overlook at their finite natural resources and become guardians of the region they live in.
Since the proposition of education is a long term action plan, and could present results only for the next generation. I think it would be prudent to have also a short action list to contribute to this new and innovative cultural community mindset. Some recommendations are to articulate a new legislation limiting the water usage per residence considering the number of residents of each home. Industries should determine targets and public compromises to reduce the water usage inside their installations and processes, and the KPIs should already be demanded for the current year.
To be quick and precise, the actions to overcome this problem lies within the people by empowering themselves, as citizens, employees and starting to make their own difference influencing laws, reviewing their consumption with responsability and looking after for the next generations natural resources availability.
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- Write about the following topic?Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.What problems dos this shortage causeWhat measures could be taken to overcome these problems 89
- The diagram bellow shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...se the availability of water for a long period of time, or even permanently. Considering all...
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Line 10, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this problem lies within the people by empowering themselves, as citizens, empl...
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Line 10, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... after for the next generations natural resources availability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5972972973 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05083422712 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.08405213 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.307692308 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180107906404 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600692869919 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333824942157 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919352225433 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298714940985 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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