Write about the following topic:
Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, people are provided with a good number of options to satisfy their craving for knowledge. While being wild-spread enough, most museums are not free of charge for the attendants. Despite the many advantages museums receive from fees, I feel that restricting a free entrance is predominantly disadvantageous. This would be shown by looking at the money opportunities of visitors and the ratio of corruption of museum workers.
For one, although imposing charges may be lucrative, it constitutes a sensitive money drag for visitors. With being the most frequent attendants of museums, students fall short of covering the price for entrance. For instance, I used to pay a visit to the Berlin national museum which entrance ticket was approximately 50 euro that exceeded my month scholarship. As most students do not have a well-paid occupation, a museum visit may be tremendously expensive for them. Thus, it makes me feel that imposing charges is exorbitantly disapproving as it hinders students’ access.
In addition to this, the vast majority of museums is endowed with the financial support of state funds, and additional charges may be a bait for museum workers. For example, they can be exposed to the temptation of money laundering or improper application of finances. In this case, charges also constitute a money burden for visitors and are not allocated to museum needs. This idea underpins the point about numerous snags of imposing fees for entrance.
To conclude, the barring of not prosperous students from the knowledge and a hypothetical inclination of museum workers to money laundering outweigh the minor proses of imposing charges. Thus, I strongly believe that in a foreseeable future the number of free museums will be predominant over the paid ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...ch entrance ticket was approximately 50 euro that exceeded my month scholarship. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27972027972 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04096117417 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9498299314 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311929616728 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115170767871 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593446093174 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197579395735 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590393506534 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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