Write an essay about the effects of online dating
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;"><span lang="VI">Some people today feel they cannot meet someone in their everyday lives so they turn to the internet to find a prospective partner, people us the internet as a way of meeting new people. Online dating has become the new way of finding your soul mate. The internet has made dating more convenient. However, online dating brings many unnecessary problems for users such as fraud, sexual abuse, information theft… </span><span lang="EN-US">This essay attempts to point out some</span><span lang="EN-US"> </span><span lang="EN-US">problem</span><span lang="EN-US"> </span><span lang="VI">and prove the consequences of online dating.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;"><span lang="VI"> </span><span lang="EN-US">The</span><span lang="VI"> most unfavorable quality is that the user faces the risk of fraud. This is a clear limitation because of the risk of meeting a dishonest person who created a profile with a dating site only for scamming other members. They say they are in need of help and would appreciate it if they could cooperate with money. The FTC shows that, in 2019, Americans lost $ 201 million to online fraudsters. In fact, the amount that victims lose due to dating scams is higher than any other type of scam. These criminals often approach victims, build close relationships and then borrow money or request virtual transactions to receive gifts. Additionally, another consequence of the issue is information theft. Dating apps are used around the world, such as Tinder and Badoo, often used as bait to be used by cybercriminals to spread malware on mobile devices or retrieve personal data. The user's data is then used or trafficked by cybercriminals. Analysis of malware through 20 popular dating apps and the keyword "dating" showed that 1,963 malicious files were released in 2019 under the guise of official apps. Notably, 2/3 of them were camouflaged under the Tinder app (1,262 files) and 1/6 were disguised under the Badoo app (263 files). Both are popular dating apps used around the world.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;"><span lang="VI"> In conclusion, online dating has a significant consequence for the user. Therefore, you need to be careful when participating in online dating. If the other person shows signs of being dishonest, you should ignore it to avoid getting into trouble.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;"><span lang="VI"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3115.0 1615.20841683 193% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 7.34669811321 5.12529762239 143% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.0742175978 2.80592935109 359% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.328726064 49.4020404114 424% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.666666667 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0457263800747 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396057718179 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403584931796 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457263800747 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 25.65 12.4159519038 207% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.