Write an essay indicating to what extent you agree or disagree with the statement below.
Limits should be set on the amount of time children spend looking at screens.
Some people believe that children should be allowed to use electronic devices such as tablets, computers and smartphones in moderation in order to protect their eyes and health. As far as I am concerned, it is necessary for younger-generations to be disciplined to control their on screen time.
Initially, the effects on eye due to excessive use of smart devices are incalculable as some children may have health problems when they spend too much time using electronc devices. Especially, eye diseases including myopic, hyperopia, dry eye disease, eye strain, etc are common in juvenlien and teenager. In addition, their behaviors will be affected negatively by phone abuse, hence, most kids spending a good amount of time on phones seem not to have a strong attachment to their families.
Conversely, children who are encouraged to exploit the benefits of technology will have enhanced preparations for their futures. Using phones is not the main reason leading to people poor health, therefore, chilren should use smart electronic devices to learn and develop their personal talents. For instance, they can study useful knowledge online or look up information necessary for their learning. Of another good example for this is in the pandemic period from 2019 to 2021, by using compters and phones for school frequently, students are able to ultilize these devices well and improve their scores.
In conclusion, we should control the amount of time children use electronic devices and guide them to use these items for the right purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, hence, look, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25101214575 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85500033234 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4061722516 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.7 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108707247459 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509275478921 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376896589852 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843943355953 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331973327899 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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