write a paragraph to talk about the values of that people gain from their peactise of going on diet
No matter what your age, our daily food choices can make a huge difference in your overall health. A balanced diet that gives our body the nutrients it needs to function correctly and bring about various benefits of body. Diet is increasingly becoming popular because we can have a healthy lifestyle One of the benefits of healthy eating habits for us is helping them maintain a healthy weight. With healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and whole grains, we may easily keep their intake balanced and control their weight. We can lower the risk of overweight and obesity later and can be more self-confidence in your life. In addition to, healthy habits help prevent certain health conditions, such as heart disease, stroke, and high blood pressure. What's more, diet may play an important role in improving mood and have lots of energy for our life. Because energy is something that everyone needs to have better academic performance and high efficiency. Without the necessary energy to complete our daily tasks and enjoy life, all other things are pretty meaningless and lose their value since you can’t enjoy them. So if we always feel sleepy or not in the mood for anything .When we have a balanced diet that give it the fuel it needs to properly function. A healthy diet offers us a healthy longer life to enjoy the beauty of nature for a much longer time. Thus, you can even improve your quality of life and contribute something valuable. In conclusion, diet brings about a happier life, a better eatinghabit and help people less vulnerable to diseases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88014981273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52711591725 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2550079754 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988751821222 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377645129364 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403163266738 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988751821222 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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