Writing, reading and mathematics are the three major subjects. Some people think that computer skills should be added as a fourth subject. What extent do you agree or disagree?
For centuries, writing, reading and math have always been the holy trinity of education. However, with the rapid advancement of technology, many argue that computer skills should also be recognized as a core subject too. This essay will show support for the previous statement.
Firstly, having proficient computer skills can prove to be very useful when searching for job opportunities. In the digital ages, one of the most valued skills that most companies seek out in a resume is computer expertise. Therefore, including IT as a mandatory subject in school can help students increase their chances of apprenticeship and long- term employment.
Secondly, teaching students a command of basic technical skills greatly benefits them. An example would be how students can get access to any learning materials on the Internet without much trouble, because they've already been taught beforehand. Additionally, doing assignments on software such as Power point or Word facilitates one's self- studying ability, as well as creativity.
In conclusion, besides the three conventional subjects, I firmly believe that a notable fourth subject which is computer literacy needs to be added to the modern school curriculum for the aforementioned reasons.
- Writing reading and mathematics are the three major subjects Some people think that computer skills should be added as a fourth subject What extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Writing reading and mathematics are the three major subjects Some people think that computer skills should be added as a fourth subject What extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Writing reading and mathematics are the three major subjects Some people think that computer skills should be added as a fourth subject What extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56020942408 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97609786816 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727748691099 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1423139845 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209178581394 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684151917335 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619184375339 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120659226735 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494664992861 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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