Writing task 2 (an essay)
Internet contains a lot of information, however, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s world, technology has changed human lives significantly. Many technological devices and systems have been invented in the last decade. The internet is one prevalent system that has improved our lives. Getting information through the internet is a very convenient way for updated news. However, some people say that the internet sometimes contains a lot of inaccurate information which is not a good source for getting information. The accuracy of information on the internet will be discussed carefully.
On the one hand, some people who assert that online information is not correct...
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The purpose of this intention is attraction many readers
The purpose of this intention is attracting many readers
The purpose of this intention is to attract many readers
are always base on the published information
are always based on the published information
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1999 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.247 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.96 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.318 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.979 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5