Writing Task 2 (an essay)
In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your opinion.
Youth is a brighter side for the future. it is argued, most of the students prefer to live with their friends except their parents after completing higher education in certain nations worldwide. I am a strong advocate for this approach and benefits of it will be covered in this essay. These days, it has become a trend among the youngsters that leaving the parents home once they finish school education for their further study in diverse countries. A fundamental benefit for this is that they enhance knowledge about the culture where they do further study and develop communication skills as well as they learn the rules and regulations of that particular nation. For example, there are many candidates from India who are well settled in developed countries like Canada, Australia, America because they learned foreign languages and rule and regulations. Moreover, with this practice, they learned how to tackle with pros and cons which are come in their life . most of the young people preffered to live with their mates instead of their guardians.they think that it can be a good option for the better future.Beacuse they are very keen to learn the modes of the outer world.Beacause they wanted to think like them.they know that it cannot be possible without leaving their comfort zone.they are ready to face any kind of difficult to enhance their skills and knowledge.they know that once they make this feat then anything can be possible and they can live any where in the world. To sum up, I firmly believe that students should leave the comfort zone once they completed their study because with this decision can handle their responsibilities and get success in their life by self
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- Writing Task 2 (an essay)In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your o 56
- Writing Task 2 (an essay)In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your o 56
- Writing Task 2 (an essay)In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your o 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...outh is a brighter side for the future. it is argued, most of the students prefer ...
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Line 1, column 963, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...os and cons which are come in their life . most of the young people preffered to l...
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Line 1, column 966, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...and cons which are come in their life . most of the young people preffered to live w...
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Line 1, column 1115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beacuse
... be a good option for the better future.Beacuse they are very keen to learn the modes o...
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Line 1, column 1180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beacause
...n to learn the modes of the outer world.Beacause they wanted to think like them.they kno...
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Line 1, column 1463, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...thing can be possible and they can live any where in the world. To sum up, I firmly beli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, well, for example, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94366197183 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63675280866 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.601954718 49.4020404114 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.0 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375274513076 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148923113956 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810171110178 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375274513076 0.151304729494 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.